tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5203041259154417963.post1646338086326368863..comments2023-05-16T07:09:00.086-04:00Comments on Rough Draught: Short StoryYackihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00806399922503867640noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5203041259154417963.post-66017876118150875542009-05-18T03:03:00.000-04:002009-05-18T03:03:00.000-04:00Thanks y'all. Gonna pick this up.Thanks y'all. Gonna pick this up.Olekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17048849556218014693noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5203041259154417963.post-76422873404208135842009-05-04T13:42:00.000-04:002009-05-04T13:42:00.000-04:00I reread this because I thought I owed you a more ...I reread this because I thought I owed you a more thorough critique, but my first comment stands: Everything seems in place, but a description of the neighbor, maybe with a little past history, would be good. Again, keep at it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5203041259154417963.post-38130852029388558852009-04-17T23:43:00.000-04:002009-04-17T23:43:00.000-04:00I've had soooo many mornings of not knowing what h...I've had soooo many mornings of not knowing what happened. But besides that useless fact, I like it. Write more.Aileen Awesomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00221444522307030409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5203041259154417963.post-1195257560905944232009-04-16T00:13:00.000-04:002009-04-16T00:13:00.000-04:00I like where this is going. A description of the n...I like where this is going. A description of the neighbor seems necessary. Keep at it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5203041259154417963.post-22374425149714604482009-04-15T20:50:00.000-04:002009-04-15T20:50:00.000-04:00you know, i could lend you some money if you're hu...you know, i could lend you some money if you're hungry... <br /><br />i like it, write faster.Yackihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00806399922503867640noreply@blogger.com